IELTS Writing: Task 1 Assessment criteria and its implications for teaching

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I often get students who need to, for example, improve from 5.5 to 6.5 in writing, but only have a week or two before their exam.  At first it sounds a bit like mission impossible, because in such a short time there is very little we can do to improve students grammar and vocabulary. Fortunately for our students, IELTS is not just about correct and varied language.

In this post I’d like to discuss the IELTS Writing Task 1 assessment criteria and its implications for preparing students for the exam. We’ll identify the most common mistakes students make that stop them from getting the desired band, which can at the same time be very easily fixed in a relatively short time. I’ll focus on Task 1 here, because for most students it is something completely new, and can turn out to be quite challenging.

Let’s get started then. Below you can see the assessment criteria (public version – the one the examiners get is super top-secret). You can easily download the public assessment criteria in pdf from for example the official IELTS site. You can click on the image below to enlarge it.

band descriptors task 1

As you can see, there are four criteria, each of which is marked completely independently. That means you could (in theory) get a 9 in LR (Lexical Resource), but only 5 on TA (Task Achievement). The final score for the task is an average of all four criteria. The score is rounded down. This means that TA: 6, CC: 6, LR: 6 and GRA: 7 would give you a 6, while TA: 6, CC: 6, LR: 6 and GRA: 5 would give you 5.5. Of course, TA: 6, CC: 6, LR: 7 and GRA: 7 would add up to 6.5.

It is important to know which band your student needs as this will determine the areas you should focus on in the classes. In most cases (e.g. for visa or study reasons), students need a 6.5. As a result, we’ll focus our attention on the descriptors for band 5, 6 and 7.

In this post, I’ll look at TA first, because:

  • students usually don’t know how to approach the task
  • the most common mistakes are very easy to fix
  • even students whose language is very good, often get low scores on TA
  • it’s relatively easy to bring a student up from 5 to 7 in a short time

I crossed out points which refer to IELTS General Training Assessment as we will only focus on the Academic IELTS, which is the format 90% of candidates choose.

When you look at the criteria, decide:

  1. which two points stop you from getting band 6?
  2. what is an overview and why is it important?
  3. what could be classified as irrelevant, inaccurate and inappropriate details?
  4. how is band 7 specifically better than band 6?

TA task 1Suggested answers:

  1. No data (i.e. no numbers) in the description and/or no overview. The student also focuses too much on detail.
  2. An overview presents the main or general trends that can be seen in the graph, e.g. Overall, the sales of desktop computers declined significantly during the period. Without an overview, the student will not get band 6
  3. Inappropriate: any evaluation or personal comments on the data. Irrelevant: data that is not presented, comments which do not relate to the graph. Inaccurate: factual mistakes in the description (e.g. with dates or numbers)
  4. The overview is clear and there are no inaccurate or inappropriate information as described above in point 3.

How should this inform our teaching?

When checking my students’ writing, I sometimes want to cry when I get a Task 1 which in terms of CC, LR and/or GRA could be easily 7, but the student didn’t include any data. Or there’s no overview. Or the student interprets the data. It’s such a shame, because all these mistakes limit the work to 5 on TA. They’re also very easy to fix. In one of the next posts I’ll show you an example lesson which does  exactly that.

Another important point we need to highlight to our students is that they should not focus on all the details. For example, describing what exactly happened in every single year in the graph or chart is not a good idea. Instead, the student should notice the main features of the graph, i.e. the most salient features, such as the high/low points, the starting/end values, the rises and falls, and describe these accordingly.

So, to sum up, in order to get band 6 or 7, the student should:

  • present an overview of the main trends (preferably in the conclusion)
  • use data accurately
  • NOT comment on the data, nor interpret it in any way
  • NOT focus on all the details
  • notice key features and describe them accordingly

If you’re interested in other tips for IELTS Writing Task 1, you might want to read this post where I discuss the DOs and DONTs of Task 1.

If you have any comments or suggestions, feel free to comment below or drop me a message. For IELTS preparation courses, please click here or Contact me directly.

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34 thoughts on “IELTS Writing: Task 1 Assessment criteria and its implications for teaching

    1. Yes. Usually sts struggle with it, because they have no clue how to approach the task. Once they’re familiar with it, it becomes quite an easy and mechanical task. You don’t need to be a good writer, or have a wide vocabulary to do well here.

        1. I guess it gives those with a head for figures a chance to shine. If you’re going to do science in university you don’t need to write beautiful essays, but you do need to be able to analyse and describe data.
          Not defending the task in any way, mind you. Just giving a possible justification for it.
          When my sts realise how easy it can be, they actually start to like it a lot 🙂

  1. I really liked this post and I am thank you for the time and effort you provided. I am IELTs candidate and I want to be part with your network, so is there any way that I can register to receive your posts? Thank you so much in advance.

      1. Thanks for this learning skills, pls how can I join a group to enable me practice, my english skills is very poor and my examination date is fast approaching.

  2. Thank you for this summary–I’ll admit this is my least favourite part of the IELTS as a teacher. I tell students that one approach is to imagine that they’ve been doing a lot of research into a particular topic and now it’s time to present their very busy boss with the results. Of course the boss knows about the topic so doesn’t need any explanation or intrepretation–just a 3 minute summary of the main trends.
    This helps maintain focus on the results and keep the writing short, and also gives a real-world example of when we might have to do something similar.

  3. I think identifying the most common mistakes students make in ielts writing task and knowing how to avoid them is the most effective way to jump from band 5.5 to 6 or even higher. With adequate practice, it would be easier for an IELTS taker to acquire the needed band. I practiced a lot using this http://www.ieltspodcast.com/category/ielts-writing-task/ and was able to secure a band 7 on Writing. Finally, I can now apply for a PR!

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